mind noise by ash raymond james

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Something a little different

It's form weekend but with a twist

Ash Raymond James
Jul 4, 2021
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Substackers!!

This weekend I wanna do something different. Instead of me giving you a form, I want you to give me a form and a topic. Whether it is haiku, tanka, 3x3, fib or anything (but sonnets). I will then write them up and share them Wednesday. I am ready for the challenge. Also, here's a picture of me holding my new book which is officially released in ten days!!

threebythree

I AM tired

of FEELING tired

BEYOND my bones

if you ain't listened to this before, listen

and incase you missed it

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Scheme is a weird poem to me. It was an exercise I was doing to simply rhyme words for fun and out of the dozen non usable poems came a bunch of usable lines and the rhyme scheme was born by accident. It was originally two pages long but I trimmed it down because it seemed to drag. Some lines were also too niche such as:

living lavish like Horace Radiche

i don't write rhyming poems because I end up rhyming too much and I guess that's because I listen to too much hop hop but no regrets. Maybe I'll do a scheme two soon with the same process and see if anything is born. I'll update you if I do. See you soon homies.

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dance terribly to this song, you've earned it

And I mean terribly. Like so bad people six towns over cringe.

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Laura
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Jul 6, 2021Liked by Ash Raymond James

"anything (but sonnets)" makes me wonder what is wrong with sonnets or why you don't like them.. I guess that's the topic, explain in any form you like :)

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